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[翻译资料] 舞-Hime drama cd風華學園史第一章 第四話 祭りのあと(祭典之後) 翻譯

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发表于 2007-4-18 10:32 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
小的搜尋了很多地方都找不齊"風華學園史"的中文翻譯...(還是有我找不到? 是的話麻煩有的大大貼一下出來可以嗎?)於是就找到外國網去, 結果找到了一話是沒看過翻譯的~ 其實我本來是想找第一章的EX話(ボーナストラック)的...結果卻意外地找到這個@@ 真的好想看ex話的翻譯呢...靜夏啊...yamiboqe010
雖然是英文, 但總比沒翻譯好吧~^^(其實我是想翻做中文的, 但小的英文又沒好到這個地步, 怕翻得不夠傳神, 所以就直接貼英文版算了...yamibon040 ) 貼出來的最主要原因是因為有可愛的夏樹在...yamibohk05 (如果有會長在話就更加好了...> <)

出處: animesuki.com
譯者: 沒有提及是誰...|||

Homura Nagi: Seven months in the future… The school heads towards summer break. The Himes make cake.. Blahblahblah (generally uninteresting exposition of what happened in episode whatever with Midori presiding the Iron Chef cake competition.)

That being said, happy birthday Mai-chan. Next time let me eat some cake too.



Mai: CD Drama, Mai Hime. Stories of Fuuka Gakuen. Episode 4: After the Festival.




Mai: Takumi, Akira and Yayoi get back home safely okay? Thanks for coming it was fun! Bye!

(door closes and the sound of Mai walking)

Mai: Thanks a lot Chiie and Aoi. I’m a little worn out.

Chiie: Your welcome.

Aoi: Doing this much is nothing. And besides… right?

Chiie: Right, the night only starts now. There still lots of fun things to do…

Mikoto: Oh does this mean we’re going to eat more cake?

Mai: But you already ate a lot. It wasn’t enough for you?

Mikoto: Hm. No… I love cake!

Natsuki: Ah… It’s finally over.

(next is badly translated. It appears that Natsuki had used Mai’s bath)

Mai: How was the water?

Natsuki: It was fine. (after this I understand better) Sorry about that. I’m going home now.

Chiie: Huh? But your going by bike right?

Aoi: If you go home now, you’ll be cold.

Natsuki: I’ll be fine besides it’s summer.

Aoi: But I would like to talk to Kuga-san more since I rarely do so.

Chiie: So would I. I have quite an interest in you too. I wanted an opportunity to talk to you intimately for some time (no not that type of intimate perverts… Though Chiie’s tone of voice makes me and apparently Natsuki wonder).

Natsuki: Er… There’s nothing much about to talk to me about.

Mikoto: What’s wrong Natsuki? Your face is red.

Mai: She’s just nervous (shy? Embarrassed?)

Natsuki: (denial) Who’s feeling nervous? (shy/embarrassed)

Mai: All right, all right. Why don’t you just borrow my pajamas and stay over.

Natsuki: (reluctant) Um… Well…

Aoi/Chiie/Mai: Hmmm?? (interest)

Natsuki: (defeated) Well if you insist…

Aoi: Yes!

Chiie: (most likely in her head) Mwahahaha (not really but Chiie sure sounds evil) Now I can attack Kuga Natsuki without her knowing. (… I don’t think I translated this right. I assume that what Chiie means is she can find out ‘interesting’ information on Natsuki without being seen as too nosy or such)

Natsuki: What am I? A rarity?

(sound of knocking)

Mai: … The knocking isn’t for this room right?

Nao: (still knocking) Hey! Aoi! Are you there? Really, locking me out here…

Aoi: It’s Nao-chan

(Aoi gets up and opens the door to call Nao)

Aoi: Nao-chan~! Over here!

Nao: Really Aoi… What are you doing over at Tokiha’s place?

Mikoto: Nao!

Nao: Hey Mikoto… (sees Natsuki) Well, well… So you’re here also…

Natsuki: (obviously these two do not get along… at all) You’ve certainly burned the day away eh? no miso supongu musume! (What the hell is Natsuki saying? I know she’s insulting Nao but really…)

Nao: I don’t need to hear that from you. josei koro rabu/ra onna? (… whoa did Nao just call Natsuki a lesbian?… I don’t understand their insults L)

(Sound of glares of doom hitting each other)

Chiie: (Whispering) Hey Mai… Did something happen between those two to hate each other?

Mai: Um… Well… Something has happened.

Chiie: Ohh… So there were things going on in the background that I didn’t see.

Aoi: Stop Kuga-san and Nao-chan. Today is Mai-chan’s birthday! Smile and laugh at each other.

(obviously Aoi’s call for peace is ignored)

Nao: Who would…

Natsuki: To this thing?

Aoi: You can’t! Smile at each other.

Nao/Natsuki: No.

Aoi: Nao-chan! If you refuse to get along… (Voice starts to tear up) I’ll start crying~!

(Sound of Nao freezing.)

Mikoto: Nao’s… frozen…

Mai: Why?

Chiie: It’s Aoi’s secret technique: she cries in a great big voice with lots of tears. She cries like there’s no tomorrow… Moreover once she starts, she doesn’t stop until there’s an apology…

Mai: Er.. Sounds like it’s really loud/annoying.

Aoi: (almost heartbroken) Nao-chan~!

Nao: (almost panicking) All right! I understand!

Aoi: And you Kuga-san? You understand?

Natsuki: Um… Sure

(Aoi comes back to her perky self)

Aoi: Oh, I’m relieved.

Nao:… Really… So what? Today is your birthday?

Mai: Um yeah. Your welcome to celebrate with us. There’s still some food leftover that everyone brought over… So how about it?

Nao: Hm… Birthday eh. If that’s the case I better give you a present too.

Mai: (Suspicious) Er… You don’t have worry about that. I don’t need to…

Nao: No no no. Just wait here a minute. Aoi, lend me your keys.

Aoi: o…okay

(Keys are exchanged and Nao leaves for moment)

Nao: (evil voice) Kuga Natsuki, Tokiha Mai… Why not since you two are in the same place right now. I’ll mess both of you up.

(door closes)

Mai: A present from Nao?… How unexpected.

Aoi: Really? Well it’s true that rough around the edges, refuses to apologize for anything and has a foul mouth but Nao-chan does have a pretty good heart.

Chiie: There are times I find you amazing Aoi… Especially right now.

(door opens)

Nao: Sorry to keep you waiting~! Here you go Mai-san. A present from me.

Mai: Thank you very… huh?

(dramatic showdown music)

Natsuki: Hey, Senou… Is this what good girls do?

Aoi: (Nervous laughter)

Chiie: This is… (Damn it Chiie slow the hell down! She explains that the particular drink is banned by the student council upon pain of a 24 hour lecture/mass with the sister and father and other stuff but I can‘t translate it completely)

Nao: The night is long. (badly translated from here on) Lets drink it till there is nothing left (Other stuff which I don‘t understand). I’ll defeat you. Then take unflattering photos of you to spread around everywhere!

Natsuki: I accept your challenge.

Nao: You have guts… (badly translated) It’s not as if I’m amongst questionable individuals.

Chiie: Whoa… Those two are really into this.

Mai: (depressed) This could be the worst day of my life after all.


Homura Nagi: Now now children. You’re only supposed to be doing that when you twenty years old. That being said, this story continues next time!

[ 本帖最后由 bear 于 2007-4-18 10:44 编辑 ]

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发表于 2007-4-23 17:37 | 显示全部楼层
上班偷空翻的,今晚回去听听有什么要改进的。不足之处还请大人们指教~~OTL

去听了DRAMA核对了下,发现原文和英译有少许出入,改了。

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白毛:7月某日...就快放暑假了,公主们做了蛋糕捏~~(后略,基本上就是交代碧“真.蛋糕师就是我”大赛那件事XD--英译注)

就是这样喽,生日快乐51~下次也请我吃蛋糕嘛。


51: 巧海,晶还有Yayoi(谁啊),路上小心哦?今天真开心呢,谢谢你们!再见~(关门声,脚步声)

51: 千绘,葵,真是谢谢你们喽。不过我有点累了。

千绘:荣幸之至。

葵:这不算什么啦。(对千绘)那么接下来。。。?

千绘:是啊,夜晚这才刚刚开始呐,还有许许多多的乐趣在等待着我们。。。(好YY~ -_-b)

命:就是说还有更多的蛋糕可吃喽?(偶败给你了~ -_-b||||)

51: 都吃了那么多了还不够吗?

命:嗯!不够啊,我好喜欢蛋糕啊!

95: 唉。。。总算完了。

(接下去的部分翻得不是很好,似乎是95在借用51的浴室--英译注)

51: 水还好吗?

95: 嗯,还可以。(接下来比较听得懂了)那么抱歉打扰了,我回去了。

千绘:嗯?是要骑机车回去的吧?

葵:这么回去的话会感冒的哦。

95: 不会啊,再说现在还是夏天嘛。

葵:难得有这样的机会,人家还想跟95同学说说话的说~

千绘:就是说啊。我也对95同学很感兴趣啊,很想有机会“私下”和你聊聊啦~~(这边的“私下”应当不是“那种”意思,但千绘的语调让人不由起疑~~显然95也那么认为XD--英译注)

95: 啊。。。跟我应该没什么可聊的吧。

命:夏树为什么脸红了?

51: 她只是有点不好意思啦。

95: 谁不好意思了?!

51: 好啦好啦。要不今晚就留这里怎么样?可以把我的睡衣借你穿哦。(。。。又要?会长知道了会哭的。。。说笑)

95: 唔。。。但是。。。

葵/千绘/51: 嗯~~???

95(估计是吓到了...XD): 算了,既然你们非要坚持的话。。。

葵:太好了!

千绘:(心音,坏笑)这下我就能对95来个出其不意~~(总觉得偶译得不太对。千绘应当是想“出其不意”地套出关于95的什么“有趣的”情报吧--英译注)

95: ...难道我是什么稀有动物吗?

(敲门声)

51: ...不是在敲我们的门吧?

奈绪(继续敲):喂!葵!你在吗?真是的,把我锁在外面...

葵:是小奈啦。

(葵开门)

葵:小奈~这边哟~

奈绪:真是的...在鸨羽那边干什么呢?

命:奈绪!

奈绪:嘿小命...(对95)哎呀哎呀,你也在啊...

95: 看来你今天也玩得很尽兴嘛,嗯?no miso supongu musume!(什么跟什么啊?海绵蛋糕?!偶不知道原译也不知道~~!日语达人Hel~~~p!!)

奈绪:你没资格说我吧,josei koro rabu/ra onna?(NANI?! Hel~~~p!!)

(空中爆出火花)

千绘(耳语):喂51...那两人之间有什么过节吗?

51(可以想像那苦笑的脸-_,-): 嗯...是啊...是有些过节。

千绘:哦~~居然有连我都不知道的内幕呢~~

葵:95同学~小奈~别这样。今天是51的生日呀,大家笑一笑吧!

奈绪(无视):谁会...

95(无视): 对那种家伙笑?!

葵:别这样!笑一笑嘛~

奈绪/95: 才不要!(...)

葵:小奈!你要再不听话(哭腔),我、我可要哭了~~

奈绪冻结XDXDXD

命:奈绪...结冰了耶...

51: 怎么回事啊?

千绘:这可是葵的绝招哦:她要一哭起来啊那可是惊天动地滔滔不绝哦~~简直就好像世界末日一样...而且啊,不向她认错她是绝对不会停下来的。

51: 呃...那样的确很棘手呢。

葵:(山雨欲来的背景音乐+梨花带泪状XDXD)小~奈~!!

奈绪(陷入混乱状态XD):行了行了!我知道了!

葵:那么95同学你~~呢?

95(冷汗ing):知...知道了啦。

葵(复原):太好了。

奈绪:...真是...那么?(对51)今天是你生日?

51: 啊是的。你要来一起庆祝吗?大家带来的食物还有剩的哦,怎么样?

奈绪:嗯...生日吗。这样的话我也该送你件礼物才好。

51(不安): 呃...其实你不必的...

奈绪:不行不行不行。稍等片刻。葵,钥匙借我。

葵:好...好的。

奈绪离开

奈绪:(心音)玖我夏树,鸨羽舞衣~~正好你们都在,一会有你们好瞧的!(关门)

51:奈绪会送礼物?真叫人意外呢。

葵:是吧?别看小奈她啊总是又粗鲁又固执嘴巴也很坏,但本质其实是个好孩子哦。

千绘:有时我真不得不对你刮目相看呢,小葵...现在更是如此。

奈绪:久等了~51同学,这是给你的礼物。

51: 非常感...哎?

95: 喂,濑能…这就是“好孩子”的行为啊?

葵:(干笑)啊?哈哈,哈哈哈...

千绘:这、这不是。。。(千绘拜托讲慢点啦!总之就是说什么这种酒是经过一翻周章并应神甫及修女等的一致要求而为学生会所禁止的...但是偶没法逐字译出来--英译注)

奈绪:夜晚还很漫长不是么。就让我们来拼下酒量吧(大意)!我一定会胜过你,然后要拍下你的丑态四处散播!

95: 我接受挑战!

奈绪:你还真有胆啊!哪怕在那些小混混俱乐部里也没几个敢和我拼的!

千绘:哇哦!她们认真起来了!

51: 我敢说这会是我人生中最糟的一天...(喂喂,打起精神来向前看。。。更糟的还在前面咧)


白毛:哎呀哎呀,孩子们记住哦,在年满20岁以前不可以这么做哟 ...就是这样,下回见喽!

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葵是和里叶一样的腹黑人妻,鉴定完毕-_,-

接下来是命猫完食记...让偶们默哀-_,-

[ 本帖最后由 7695 于 2007-4-25 08:29 编辑 ]

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发表于 2007-4-25 13:40 | 显示全部楼层
謝謝大人的翻譯 可是我下手太慢了 舞 DRAMA 我在資源區想下載都無法下載了
我好想聽><yamiboqe029
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-26 10:04 | 显示全部楼层
哈~ 謝謝7695的翻譯呢~ 之前看見沒有回覆還以為沒人需要...我多此一舉呢...yamiboqe029
話說夏樹和奈緒互罵對方的內容真是個謎...yamiboqe016
>>葵是和里叶一样的腹黑人妻,鉴定完毕-_,-
我也有同感葵是腹黑人妻來的...- -|||

原帖由 speed 于 2007-4-25 13:40 发表
謝謝大人的翻譯 可是我下手太慢了 舞 DRAMA 我在資源區想下載都無法下載了
我好想聽><yamiboqe029

https://bbs.yamibo.com/thread-17074-1-7.html
你是在這帖下的嗎? 我下載到呢~yamiboqe026

[ 本帖最后由 bear 于 2007-4-26 22:02 编辑 ]
发表于 2007-4-26 16:11 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bear 于 2007-4-26 10:04 发表
哈~ 謝謝7695的翻譯呢~ 之前看見沒有回覆還以為沒人需要...我多此一舉呢...yamiboqe029
話說夏樹和奈緒互罵對方的內容真是個謎...yamiboqe016
>>葵是和里叶一样的腹黑人妻,鉴定完毕-_,-
我也有同感 ...

恩恩我的確也是用這帖 可是仍然下載不到的說yamiboqe029
我是用flashget是要換其他下載程式嗎??
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-26 22:01 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 speed 于 2007-4-26 16:11 发表

恩恩我的確也是用這帖 可是仍然下載不到的說yamiboqe029
我是用flashget是要換其他下載程式嗎??


你是不是一個檔案下載完才下載另一個的? 如果是的話就不行了~ 因為我之前試過輪流下載是不行的...一定要一次過下載才行...
還有在flashget裏的"預設下載內容"的"分割檔案為"調至"10"應該會下載的快一點~
希望可以幫到你吧~
发表于 2007-4-26 23:48 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bear 于 2007-4-26 22:01 发表


你是不是一個檔案下載完才下載另一個的? 如果是的話就不行了~ 因為我之前試過輪流下載是不行的...一定要一次過下載才行...
還有在flashget裏的"預設下載內容"的"分割檔案為"調至" ...

最後我是用了一各一各下載的方式xd
不過不論怎說還是非常感謝你 在下跟你叩頭謝恩yamiboqe005
只是其他我都可以聽到= =偏偏就是這篇我不能聽= =嗚yamiboqe029
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-27 10:38 | 显示全部楼层
不用謝~^^ 現在也聽不到嗎?
发表于 2007-4-27 13:50 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 bear 于 2007-4-27 10:38 发表
不用謝~^^ 現在也聽不到嗎?

其他沒問題 就是這篇而已 話說 我dl舞乙的也是有些都無法聽><yamiboqe029
不知道是不是撥放程式的問題
发表于 2007-4-27 16:46 | 显示全部楼层
这里:

http://www.jmusics.com/list/LIST_3.html

登录就可以下,不过MS这个站常RP
发表于 2007-4-27 19:23 | 显示全部楼层
原帖由 7695 于 2007-4-27 16:46 发表
这里:

http://www.jmusics.com/list/LIST_3.html

登录就可以下,不过MS这个站常RP

喔喔 謝謝樓主 不過可以請問啥叫rp還有ms是啥意思呢
抱歉我英文白痴XDyamiboqe029
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-28 21:59 | 显示全部楼层
我想7695的意思是這個站不太穩定吧~(其實我也不知道ms和rp是什麼意思啦...但經常看到人用這2個字...yamiboqe009 )
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真是辛苦了!
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yamiboshiho 辛苦楼主~~
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翻的不錯嘛
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